I would like to talk to you about the last Birthday I attended recently it was my best friend's birth her name is Sally it was on 22/ February. Her family and I decided to make the party without her knowledge. We choose to make the celebration in her favorite restaurant and we said to all of her friends, family, and neighbors that they must come to Sally's birthday because she will be happy if she sees them.
The day before that Sally's birthday, she called me and say that tomorrow her family will back to home late and she was so sad and she asked me if I can come to her house because she did not want to be alone but I said to her that unfortunately, I can not come because my grandpa is sick and I must go with my family to visit him after that she started to cry then, I said to her ok if you want I can go to your favorite restaurant at 5 o'clock. This restaurant is near my grandpa's home after that, she stopped crying and said ok, I agree. All of this her family and I decided on it. After that, I went to the shop and bought a gift for Sally.
On the day of Sally's birthday, we went to the restaurant early for making decorations and we bought the big cake and we put sally's photo in the up of the cake. When she comes she saw the restaurant and she surprised after that she started to feel funny and said I thought that all of you forgot my birthday. Next, we ate the cake and Sally started to open her presents it was lots of. This day was a fantastic day for Sally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... if I can come to her house because she didnt want to be alone but I said to her that...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...but I said to her that unfortunately, I cant come because my grandpa is sick and I m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...can go to your favorite restaurant at 5 oclock this restaurant is near grandpas home a...
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Line 2, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ok I agree. All of this her family and I decided on it. After that, I went to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 24.0651302605 295% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.00342465753 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20442361777 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448630136986 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.541983808 49.4020404114 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.888888889 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4444444444 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114338493463 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047798661198 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711609172892 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923657307728 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612868446259 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.51 12.4159519038 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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