The reading passage and the lecture are talking about the Altruism behavior, in the reading defined what is the Altruism and gave examples about it, the lecture had an opposite opinion about it.
In the reading, they said the altruism is behavior is opposite the selfishness, which lots of mammals and humans are have that behavior, they can be sharing their foods and parts of the body with strangers, and they gave us an example which is lives in burrows in the grassland of Africa, called the Meerkat, this can make a group watch if the predators are around them while the other are individuals are eating, so, if the predators are coming next them the guards will be giving a crying alarm to give the signal to the eating individuals to escape and with that the guards will not eat.
In the listening record, the lecturer claims about the meerkat behavior that guards will not eat but they maybe eat before they guard and maybe they will be in a group in the first and when they alert the other group they will escape before them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...s, which lots of mammals and humans are have that behavior, they can be sharing thei...
^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...haring their foods and parts of the body with strangers, and they gave us an exam...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 1373.03311258 62% => OK
No of words: 187.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56684491979 5.08290768461 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17009538127 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 145.348785872 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 419.366225166 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 13.0662251656 23% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 21.2450331126 292% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.174786946 49.2860985944 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.666666667 110.228320801 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.3333333333 21.698381199 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06452816374 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162645477567 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122759596464 0.0996497079465 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694482011062 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122759596464 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694482011062 0.0443174109184 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.3589403974 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.47 53.8541721854 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.0289183223 228% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 63.6247240618 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 10.7273730684 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.498013245 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.2008830022 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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