Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that parents play a key roll in their children life. Some people believe that parents chose their children life and now they can't. Conversely, other people think that in the past, young people were more independence than now. From my vantage point, the first belief is better. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with the issue that in the past, young people should work with their father and couldn't choose their own work. They should follow their father's rules and couldn't make a decision. So they couldn't learn independence and their living depended on their parents choice completely. However, now, young man choose their work and don't pay attention to their parents, because they think that their parents don't know any things about technology.
Another equally significant point in supporting my view is that in the past, a young man didn't have any authority to choose their wife and parents find a girl for their boy. In contrast, now, young man make a relationship with a girl that they want, and if the girl will be suitable, they marry with her. And in this process, parents don't play any role. For instance, when my father was 25, my grandfather found my mom for him and my father didn't play a roll in his marriage.
To put it briefly, If one weighs the merits and demerits of aforementioned statement, one soon realized that young man is more independent than past. But that was just a story in a nutshell. In fact, there are myriads of other reasons, supporting my opinoin, which could be mentioned but are not embraced due to the dearth of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, conversely, first, however, if, so, for instance, in contrast, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75510204082 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4647170085 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4683612122 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284616859325 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923720663959 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689248488134 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166287183962 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821166302112 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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