Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this competitive world, decision making plays a vital role in people's lives. But, do young people of current generation really depend too much on their parents to make decisions?. Personally, I do agree with the statement that in the past, young people depended much on their parents to take decisions than the young people of today. I feel this waty for two main reasons, which I will explore in following essay.
First of all, there is vast difference in the growing up of current generation and past generation. The living environment, culture, food habits, education etc were far more different during past days. My own experience is compelling example for this. When my grand father was to take decision of his further studies, he was too hesitant to ask his parents about this decision, because he was afraid they might deny his proposal of further studies due to a number of factors like financial factors, transportation, image in the society etc. However, in the current senario, situations changed drastically, young generations start to live away from their families in very young age. They feel that do not need help from their parents not only in terms of decision but also in various other aspects of life.
Secondly, today is the world of technology and myriad of technological advancements impacted the humans greatly. The generation of internet provides treasure of information in just a click of fingertip. For instance, now-a-days variety of applications are available of mobile phones, laptops, ipads. These applications helps in making our lives easy, provide assistance in lot of work weather they are tough or easy. Also, the movies affected a lot in todays generation, movies show stories of young people, who always disobey their parents and disrespect them. People learn from these kinds of movies and apply the same in their own life. Therefore, they started decreasing the value of their parents in the life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that in the past, young people depended much on their parents to take decisions than the young people of today. This is because there is vast difference in the growing up of current generation and past generation, and technological advancements have reduced the value of parents decision making powers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11497326203 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73833475358 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542780748663 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7604218901 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.684210526 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456443412127 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139662735114 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151565984401 0.0737576698707 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313471670294 0.150856017488 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165657157374 0.0645574589148 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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