The issue at hand offers an interesting topics. According to the author, there will be fewer cars after twenty years than it is today. Some people may agree or disagree with the statement of the author, I, However, would like to depart from the thought of the author. I believe there would be more number of cars than it is now.
The first thing I would like to mention to support my claim is about the income of people. With the opportunity of jobs and business, the people of all around the world are able to cope with their financial challenges. The ratio of people having access to money is increasing. The number of people being able to afford cars has increased drastically than it was twenty years earlier. Therefore, I think the
Moreover, the car manufacturing company are also increasing exponentially. They are producing cars in minimum price as well. To support my point, I would like to illustrate the case of automobile industry of some twenty years ago. At that time only few company were there producing limited numbers of cars. Those cars used to be very expensive that only high level government officials, businessman could afford it.
Furthermore, the improvement in road condition but irritating public transport service would definitely enhance the number of car owners. To explain my points I would like to take an example of my retired neighbour. the old couple enjoy going in long ride where public transport service is not available. They wanted some privacy as well so they hesitate to take a cab. Therefore the best choice for them is buying a car.
Ultimately, I feel that there would be more cars in use after twenty years than they are today. The above presented reasons and explanation clearly supports my standing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'topic'?
Suggestion: topic
...The issue at hand offers an interesting topics. According to the author, there will be...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'few companies'.
Suggestion: few companies
...ome twenty years ago. At that time only few company were there producing limited numbers of...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ake an example of my retired neighbour. the old couple enjoy going in long ride whe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...as well so they hesitate to take a cab. Therefore the best choice for them is buying a ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87333333333 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60739120365 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8556791014 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287511759817 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082365015466 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112142831149 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171440689479 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105928655238 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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