Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the past decades, saving relationships have been one of the critical issue for human beings. and some times telling some truth put people relationships in danger. people always confront dilemma whether tell lie or not. Opposite opinion of some people, I am inclined to believe that if individuals want keep in touch with each other, they should not tell the truth sometimes. I fell that for two main reasons which I will explaning them in the following assay.
the first reason coming to my mind is that sometimes telling the truth can hurt people emotion. also, some true things can decrease people`s self-confident. as a result of that, friendships can end. To clarify this concept, lies are not always bad. Take a personal experience as an example, I had a friend in high school that we are diffted apart now, she had very unusual style and she had odd and awful hair style too. One day she asked me my opinion about her hair style, and I saied the truth. she felt very bad but she did not saied anything to me. I was regretful that time because i could just say it is good and did not make my friend and I feel bad.
Furthermore, another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that telling lie have benefit for many individuals in some case. To be more specific, telling some lie motive your friends to done thier career so well. For example, my father is an professional architecture. When he was young, his painting was not good enough to be an architecture, but my grandmother always acclaimed him and she saeid "my son is the best painter". He always says "had my mother not been praised, I would have not been an architecture".
In conclusion, I strongly believe that always telling the truth is not the best choice we can have. This is because truth can dimage people feeling and it can make them disappointed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72171253823 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78514878345 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7537746457 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.35 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0354578982181 0.236089414692 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0121095716788 0.076458572812 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263735017471 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0218582187816 0.150856017488 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194547294803 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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