Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
It's a waste of money for Government to fund space travel or space
exploration.
In today's world, government plays a major role in our life and there are many aspects which need government to fund the money. When comes to the question whether it's a waste of money that government funding space travel or not. Frankly speaking, the government should spend money on other more urgent areas.
To begin with, compared with space travel and space exploration, the issue of environment is more urgent. Environment changing is a matter of live and death to human being and a large quantity of people suffered from severe consequences by climate changing. Accordingly, the government should prior to spend money on the environment. For example, recently I read a news in New york Times that within 30 years, some certain countries in Southeast Asia will suffer from a catastrophic flood resulted by global warming. One country is mentioned is Bangladesh which happens to the poorest country in this area. The officials has determined to deal with this problem, while they can't established this measurement as a matter of the poverty of their government. This example illustrates that the government should put the money on environment to improve the situation of environment.
In addition, it's unnecessary for the government to fund space travel or space exploration, as this area has already become public area which can be funded and researched by multiple private firms. The space-X company is a compelling example. The space-X company is a private company owned by the famous businessman Allon Musk. In 2018, the spaceX company made a progress in space exploration and has launched a number of rockets, what's more, spaceX corporation has established an announcement that they would send a Japanese businessman to travel the moon in 2019.
Adimittedly, there are several benefits when the government determine to fund space travel. However, this policy only has a limited effect due to uncertain factors. It is a well known fact that space travel is a long term program which needs government persistently invest in. In case of laking money,the program have to be stopped and will causes a huge loss.
In conclusion, I strongly believed that the government should spend money on other more urgent areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...rnment to fund the money. When comes to the question whether its a waste of money that government fu...
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Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ney. When comes to the question whether its a waste of money that government fundin...
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...vironment. For example, recently I read a news in New york Times that within 30 years,...
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Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...est country in this area. The officials has determined to deal with this problem, w...
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Line 2, column 674, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d to deal with this problem, while they cant established this measurement as a matte...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
... Musk. In 2018, the spaceX company made a progress in space exploration and has launched a...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...n and has launched a number of rockets, whats more, spaceX corporation has establishe...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ravel is a long term program which needs government persistently invest in. In ca...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ently invest in. In case of laking money,the program have to be stopped and will cau...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...the program have to be stopped and will causes a huge loss. In conclusion, I strong...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, frankly, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13774104683 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82766232922 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0289001734 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1578947368 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287629501852 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934853997962 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852499991279 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164227037854 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661002239439 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.