Which one is the most important factor to help you work productively?Having an environment which is free of noise and distractionsKnowing that you will receive a rewardDoing something you are interested
As old saying goes, "the best teacher is an interest" and as the modern education continues to develop. When it comes to this issue, frankly speaking , I believe that the doing something i am interested in matters more.
To begin with, it is a well known fact that improving work efficiency is a continuously course which requires us to fully concentrate on the job or the work consistently. If someone do no interested in the field that he study in, he will less likely to achieve a productive result. My cousin's experience is a compelling example. He got an excellent internship after he graduated from university. At first he paid much attention on this job which contains a variety of tasks including customer service, teamwork organization and time management. However,he later found that he was not interested in this job and felt tedious. Accordingly, he could hardly get a high efficiency and had to laid off.
In addition, when taking about you will receive a reward and this is a extransic stimulus which can only has a short time encouragement and can not last for long time. Thus, this reason reinenforce my point that the interests can encourage you to perform well and forgot time unconsciously. For example, once I worked in local company and every employee was knew that we would get a reward that 3-4 times salary in the end of the year or 5 thousand dollar reward. The measurement can maintain our passion in 2-3 months and if time overly, the passion goes away and not mention the high productive.
Admittedly, having a quiet work atmosphere can bring us several benefits, while i hold the idea that this only has a limited effects. The reality tells us that many people can maintain high-efficiency when the have interests in the job because they would have confidence and they believe they can conquer every difficulty.
In conclusion, I strongly believed that if you want to be productively, the best teacher is an interest and we should learn something you are interested in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, frankly, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86588921283 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91491793233 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9339693134 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205610057772 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610390480471 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614485734431 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117612405304 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665490944209 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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