Which one of the reason is most important in helping students to study
in colleges and universities?
A. Having access to the university to tutors who can provide individual
instruction for the students who have difficulty in study.
B. Having the help and encouragement from the family and friends.
C. Having a excellent teachers in high-school who can help the students
before the university.
Use your OWN words to illustrate you point. Don’t use your
memorized examples
In today’s world , students are more likely to pay more attention to their study.
Frankly speaking ,among the three options ,I hold the idea that the family and friends would be more helpful in my study.
To begin with, actually we spent most of our time with my friends and we can learn a lot from our interaction in 4-year college life.During the process of study, we always have to face a large quantity of problems. if you want to ask help for teachers ,they may be too busy because the teachers are always preoccupied with academic research and program exchange.This time the friends and classmates can help you to solve the problems immediately.My own experience is a compelling example. In my sophomore year, I participated in a select course that every student need to make a presentation in class about the consequences of global warming, and I found i am lack of this kind of knowledge and examples.So I asked for my science teacher for help,while he was busy in a field research .Finally my roomates helped me and give me some introduction about the catastrophic flood in southeast Asia resulted by global warming.
Thanks to the help my friend gave , I performed well in my presentation.
What's more, the best way to study in university is to passively research and actively explore subjects,thus studying in a group with friends you can benefits more.For example ,once I worked in a computer program,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, frankly, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86008230453 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93751106585 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625514403292 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.830070214 48.9658058833 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.714285714 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7142857143 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 5.45110844103 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170105104153 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722670359203 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0142475983015 0.0737576698707 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784192511173 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338044923922 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 11.7677419355 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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