The government has a fund to invest in children's education. There are three choices:1.hire more teachers2.provid e preschool education3.Provide additional training for teachers, so they can know moremethods to teachchoose one an explain why.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...education awareness continues to develop,how to improve the children ability has bec...
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...children ability has become a lot issue.Some individuals suggest that the government...
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Suggestion: Frankly
...ovide additional trainning for teachers.Frankly speaking,among the three options,i hold...
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...opt the school environment more quickly.Some students may face a dilemma that they c...
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... not catch up with the lessons in class.Thus, over time these students may give up a...
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...ver time these students may give up and dont have interests in study.If the school g...
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...ive up and dont have interests in study.If the school give them preshool education...
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...n ,this issue can be solved and avoided.My cousins experience is a compelling exam...
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...sins experience is a compelling example.He begin to high school after he graduated...
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...s experience is a compelling example.He begin to high school after he graduated from ...
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...l after he graduated from middle school.In the summer vacation before the first se...
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...before the first semester of high school,his parents encouraged him to receive presc...
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...ion and he learned a variety of subjects in advance like math,literature and scie...
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...ariety of subjects in advance like math,literature and science.He approached to the study ...
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...dvance like math,literature and science.He approached to the study with dilligence...
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...nd get full preparation for high school.Thanks to his hard work in preschool education...
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...his hard work in preschool education,he perform well in high school and become a A-stra...
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... perform well in high school and become a A-straight student. Whats more, there ...
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...chool and become a A-straight student. Whats more, there are many teaching methods w...
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...e teachers could be a not efficient way.As the best way for students to have high...
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...ient way.As the best way for students to have high score or have a excellent perf...
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...or students to have high score or have a excellent perform in school is studying...
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... are more likely have a limited results.Take myself as an example. When I begin uni...
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...large quantity of time to play the game.Most of my courses were fall behind.so my te...
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...me help but the results are not obvious.However, in my sophomore year, I suddenly reali...
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... heart, the situation went on right way.This example illustrates that hire more teac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, however, if, may, so, thus, well, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24085365854 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97896745533 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.1344086022 323% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 412.043395773 48.9658058833 841% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.8 100.406767564 342% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.6 20.6045352989 318% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6 5.45110844103 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138523181026 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571118026523 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502790660041 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098381612975 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900961514018 0.0645574589148 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.1 11.7677419355 307% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 58.1214874552 9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 10.1575268817 282% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.01818996416 137% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 10.002688172 620% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.0537634409 279% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 62.0 10.247311828 605% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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