The government has a fund to invest in children's education. There are three choices:
1.hire more teachers
2.provid e preschool education
3.Provide additional training for teachers, so they can know moremethods to teach
choose one an explain why.
As the education awareness continues to develop,how to improve the children ability has become a lot issue.Some individuals suggest that the government should spent money to hire more teachers in school or provide additional trainning for teachers.Frankly speaking,among the three options,i hold the idea that government ought to fund the preschool education,
To begin with, preschool education could help the children to adopt the school environment more quickly.Some students may face a dilemma that they could not catch up with the lessons in class.Thus, over time these students may give up and don't have interests in study.If the school give them preshool education ,this issue can be solved and avoided.My cousin's experience is a compelling example.He begin to high school after he graduated from middle school.In the summer vacation before the first semester of high school,his parents encouraged him to receive preschool education and he learned a variety of subjects in advance like math,literature and science.He approached to the study with dilligence and get full preparation for high school.Thanks to his hard work in preschool education,he perform well in high school and become a A-straight student.
What's more, there are many teaching methods which might not helpful to students like hire more teachers could be a not efficient way.As the best way for students to have high score or have a excellent perform in school is studying actively and passively. Any positive study way are more likely have a limited results.Take myself as an example.
When I begin university,I was addicted into video games and I spent a large quantity of time to play the game.Most of my courses were fall behind.so my teacher give me help but the results are not obvious.However, in my sophomore year, I suddenly realized that I should stopthe video games and begin to study with diligent. Because of the transition of my heart, the situation went on right way.This example illustrates that hire more teacher may be not improve the students study.
Finally,it is obvious that providing teachers additional training are unable to deal with students' problem.To some extendt,study is a consistent course and students should actively involved or highly concentrated on.When a student give up study,the situation won't be improved nomatter how much attention the teacher pays.
In conclusion,i strongly believe that preschool education should be funded by the goverment among the three options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, frankly, however, if, may, so, thus, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36828644501 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99875367391 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562659846547 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.1344086022 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 362.561521873 48.9658058833 740% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 299.857142857 100.406767564 299% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8571428571 20.6045352989 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 5.45110844103 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 41.0 5.5376344086 740% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145446133029 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610322019872 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437206635106 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891988087581 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752249276625 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 11.7677419355 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 58.1214874552 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.1575268817 255% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 10.002688172 620% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.0537634409 239% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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