Compare and contrast the advantages of choosing a stable career over an adventurous lifestyle. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
There are claims that it is more difficult now to raise children than five decades ago. However, I feel it is easier to raise children in the past than today.
To begin with, the high price of commodities today forces parent to have only few children than the past. The average income of an ordinary family cannot afford raising more children because the consumption would be much higher. 1 child today would require baby powered milk, school tuition, and so parents are pressured to earn money. my father’s experience is a compelling example. he has 2 brothers and 3 sisters, but he only has one son. he said that back in the days, everything was cheap, unlike these days. A person then could have lunch for 0.5 yuan, but today, the same amount of lunch would cost an average of 10-20 yuan. my grandfather didn't need to earn much money to raise so many kids. Hence, today’s parents tend to have fewer kids.
What's more, parents today should put more attention to their children than 50 years ago. children can easily mislead by some tv programs and Internet shows, which has a large number of violent scenes and some misbehaviour, while children in the past didn't face this problem.
Thus, today parents must spend more time to monitor their children and set a good example. For example, an online survey indicates that delinquency rate increased 15% per year since 2012 in East Asian, and the main causes were lack of good education and strict monitoring by their parents, and the children were easily imitating violent scenes on tv. Accordingly, today‘s parent must face more challenges in educating their kids .
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is much difficult for parents to raise their children now than it was in the past because the high price of commodity and because of challenges in educating children.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to raise'.
Suggestion: to raise
...ome of an ordinary family cannot afford raising more children because the consumption w...
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Suggestion: My
...so parents are pressured to earn money. my father's experience is a compellin...
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Suggestion: He
...s;s experience is a compelling example. he has 2 brothers and 3 sisters, but he on...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...and 3 sisters, but he only has one son. he said that back in the days, everything ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ch would cost an average of 10-20 yuan. my grandfather didnt need to earn much mon...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...n average of 10-20 yuan. my grandfather didnt need to earn much money to raise so man...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...pos;s parents tend to have fewer kids. Whats more, parents today should put more att...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...on to their children than 50 years ago. children can easily mislead by some tv programs ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... programs and Internet shows, which has a large number of violent scenes and some misbehaviour, w...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...isbehaviour, while children in the past didnt face this problem. Thus, today parents...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... more challenges in educating their kids . In conclusion, I strongly believe that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of challenges in educating children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49047818169 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574603174603 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.419094169 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1764705882 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0145116947251 0.236089414692 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00468968975246 0.076458572812 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0102879905345 0.0737576698707 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00658871995636 0.150856017488 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00825530770507 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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