Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Only movies that can teach us something about real life is worth watching.
It is widely accepted that television plays a pivotal role in human beings’ living since they can be informed about a wide variety of subjects around the world. In addition, movies have profound effect on their life negatively or positively. Some people assume that watching informative movies just is supposed to be beneficial. I totally agree with this statement on account of gaining knowledge and changing their personality.
To begin with, people who watch instructive movies related to real life can gain precious knowledge and experiences to use in their own life. Indeed, some movies provide people with wonderful subjects which they may encounter the same in the future; then, different solution endowed in those movies can give them a great capacity to analyze the problem better through considering different aspects of that and address the problem easily and swiftly. Therefore, there are broad measurements to evaluate the real movies as the most valuable resources because based on experiences people can achieve and put them in their life. For instance, I am always a fan of financial documentries by which I learned how to overcome problems coming up once I am trading in stock market, resulting in making a huge profit and earn my independent living. As a result, had I not have any access to those useful resources, that is the reliable and genuine documentries, I did not have succeeded in my life.
Another reason is that real movies are of paramount imortance to enhance one’s personality. In fact, real movies have often been made based on real stories by which everyone has a great chance to learn about habits, opinion, beliefs and ideas created in various societies, which they are essencial to be up-to-dated in this sophisticated and progressive world. Accordingly, the person become aqcuinted with others’ life-style and select appropriate habits and behaviours to live and work for todays’ life. As an example, back when I was a child, I used to watch movie every morning especially Juddi Abbot as my favorite cartoon. I learned marvelous experiences to bring in my life. I learned from the polite person how to be responsible and trustable to others, thereby leading me to be a sociable and admired person.
In a word, by taking all the reasons mentioned above, we can conclude that movies made based on real events are more valuable due to the fact that viewers can not only gain more experiences to utilize in their life, can but also improve their personality.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08674698795 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82413750535 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568674698795 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2241667359 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.9375 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222435612353 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747254977015 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505070667339 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14059873502 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011894344549 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.