Do you agree or disagree with the following statements Because people are busy doing so many different things they do very few things well Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

A glance at people's attitude toward time management brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether people have time to do many different things or not. Although some individuals assert that knowledge is power and we have to know as much as we can, I, as a graduate business student and pharmacist, believe that we are able todo very few things well in our short lives.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that our time is limited and even if we do not sleep and use our time efficiently, we cannot learn many things well. For example, I am a wife, a mother, a sister, a daughter, and a student, and all of them create specific responsibilities for me. I almost run during day to satisfy the deadlines and I do not have free time to spend on my hobbies. My life is just a simple example of millions women in the world with concurrent tasks. Therefore, it is no easy to be expert in different things.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that sciences are broader than past centuries. Most scientist until 100 years ago had knowledge in many fields such as chemistry, mathematics, physics, and astronomy. Whereas today, we cannot find any researcher who publish articles even on different subject of the same major. For example, my professor researches on Influenza viruses and he does not comment on Corona viruses. Thus, it is obvious that for being successful, it is crucial to do very few things well.
Admittedly, if a person does not waste his time and devote his life on precious things, he can do several thing simultaneously. For instance, if a person is lucky to have educated and wealthy parents, he learns piano, paintings, and tennis since he is a child. However, even this lucky person cannot become a famous artist and athlete as well. As a matter of fact, we can do several things but we are not the best in all of them. nevertheless, I presume that most people only do few things well.
Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I highly recommend my friends to adhere several specialties and not to try every things. It is better to be a deep lake than an ocean with one inch depth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... namely, whether people have time to do many different things or not. Although some individual...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'several things'.
Suggestion: several things
... his life on precious things, he can do several thing simultaneously. For instance, if a pers...
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Line 4, column 430, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...but we are not the best in all of them. nevertheless, I presume that most people only do few...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58186397985 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68015283751 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561712846348 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9854062718 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7368421053 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276437163164 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810832917885 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885196290116 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142972484335 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690636739902 0.0645574589148 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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