A glance at people's attitude toward time management brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether people have time to do many different things or not. Although some individuals assert that we have to know as much as we can since knowledge is power, I, as a graduate business student and pharmacist, believe that we are able to accomplish very few things well in our short lives.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that our time is limited and even if we do not sleep and use our time efficiently, we cannot achieve many goals well. For example, I am a wife, a mother, a sister, a daughter, and a student, and all of these obligations create specific responsibilities for me. In other words, I almost run during day to satisfy the deadlines and I do not have free time to spend on my hobbies. My life is just a simple example of millions women in the world with concurrent tasks. Therefore, it is no easy to be expert in different things.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that sciences are broader than past centuries. Most scientist until 100 years ago had knowledge in many fields such as chemistry, mathematics, physics, and astronomy, Whereas today, we cannot find any researcher who publish articles even on different subject of the same major. For example, even an outstanding professor who researches on Influenza viruses cannot comment on Corona viruses. Thus, it is obvious that for being successful, it is crucial to fulfill very few things well.
Admittedly, if a person does not waste his time and devote it to precious skills, he can be master in several thing simultaneously at most. For instance, if a person is lucky to have educated and wealthy parents, he learns piano, paintings, and tennis when he is a child. However, even this lucky person cannot become a famous artist and athlete as well. As a matter of fact, we can do several things but we cannot be the best in all of them. nevertheless, I presume that most people only do few things well.
Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I highly recommend my friends to adhere several specialties ,otherwise they will not get successful. It is wiser to be a deep lake than an ocean with one inch depth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... namely, whether people have time to do many different things or not. Although some individual...
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Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'several things'.
Suggestion: several things
...to precious skills, he can be master in several thing simultaneously at most. For instance, i...
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Line 4, column 443, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...t we cannot be the best in all of them. nevertheless, I presume that most people only do few...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...my friends to adhere several specialties ,otherwise they will not get successful. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67407407407 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73595400035 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6841274384 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245086051325 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725442262059 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764429189702 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122977393292 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600853064559 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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