Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Scientific discoveries should be shared around the world. Government should not keep it privately.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Scientific discoveries should be shared around the world. Government should not keep it privately.

The scientific world is experiencing an era of fast development. In this case, a minimum advancement can be essential in pushing some specific technique forward. There have been debates over whether a scientific discovery should go public or stay private. From my perspective, I believe that sharing the science advancement should be advocated.

With an increasing influence of globalization, different countries are in close connection with each other in areas of economy, politics and of course, science. Under such circumstances, a single scientific accomplishment in one country can have great impact worldwide. In other words, a simple scientific act can have an unpredictably enlarged consequences either in a desired way or not. Therefore, if a scientific discovery that is associated with human well-being gets submerged by the government, the benefit of human as a whole will be hampered.

In addition, communication and sharing trigger the inspiration that cannot be attained by oneself, this rule is also true in scientific world. Once a discovery is published, numerous discussions and academic seminars will emerge, which is exactly what we need to achieve a breakthrough. Take the developing process of information technology as an example, the developing speed at first was steady but slow, but it sped up after the invention of the Internet. It was sharing that made the most intelligent people in the world gather their wisdom, then an advancement was achieved ten times faster than it was before.

Undeniably that some risks can be caused if countries all begin sharing news in science. For example, some evil person may be able to utilize the newly acquired knowledge from other countries to make weapons, drugs or anything that can severely endanger the world. However, this lurking danger can still be effectively curbed as long as a comprehensive censoring system is founded.

In conclusion, scientific discoveries are the common wealth of human, so a nation is not supposed to keep them as secrets. Sharing scientific discoveries allows scientific developments to benefit people internationally and can prompt innovations in a remarkable scale.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a desired way" with adverb for "desired"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46312684366 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1929806368 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610619469027 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3778513727 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.941176471 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239130801816 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076754996603 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508307102628 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134002824467 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516811968936 0.0645574589148 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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