Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The job has a greater effect on one’s overall happiness than the social life does.
We as Human beings are always in pursuit of happiness during our own lives which may come from different sources. In my point of view our social status contributes more than the career to our overall happiness in life because of the fact that we are social creatures and it helps us reach our very destination in life.
To begin with, mankind is evolved into being a social creature, therefore, it needs to be socially active to fulfill destiny. To put it in other words, the human being needs to interact with each other to meet the desire to be helpful on a larger scale. Take the ever-increasing volunteering initiatives for example; nothing beats the joy coming from being in service to higher values of the society. It is because of the fact that we consider ourselves a part of a bigger group that is sometimes the family and sometimes a community. As long as we are helpful for our mates, it is all about the pleasure in our lives.
I also believe that it is the social life that defines our place in the community. For instance, a police officer may be happier than a politician because, in the eyes of the public, the policeman serves the morals of the society, while a person involved in politics is normally serving their party participating in politics-related conflicts. So the efforts the task force makes in a city go well appreciated while a politician’s struggles translate as meaningless and maybe even disastrous attitude toward the society. So, if we are to evaluate the level of happiness in life, we should prioritize the social status accompanied by a specific job over the occupation itself.
It is undeniable that the employment status may affect one’s entire life. Simply put, the more a person earns in his or her life, the more comfortable life would be. But is it logical to conclude that this comfort will bring endless pleasure? There are plentiful examples in which people with rewarding jobs and higher salaries ended up committing suicide due to the depression sometimes accompanying this lifestyle. Therefore, our work is not as important factor as our social life when assessing their impact on being happy.
In conclusion, our place in society plays a pivotal role in making our lives joyful. It would be right if someone argues that the occupation has a huge effect on life to make it pleasant as long as the career serves the society and brings people together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...career to our overall happiness in life because of the fact that we are social creatures and it helps us...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
... to higher values of the society. It is because of the fact that we consider ourselves a part of a bigge...
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Line 9, column 447, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to translate'
Suggestion: to translate
...ted while a politician's struggles translate as meaningless and maybe even disastrou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85096153846 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78904068091 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2542221039 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16694361152 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053016773526 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493983794229 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954050797586 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421799994035 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.