In the modern era, celebrities are regarded as crucial factors contributing to the tastes and interests of people throughout the world. One of the heated debates in this realm is associated with their effects on various people in a broad age spectrum. Many people adhere to the view that they mostly influence adults, while others believe that they have a pivotal impression on teenagers’ attitudes. I firmly believe that teenagers are the primary target of the celebrities’ behaviors. In what follows, I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that young people have more flexible characteristics, and they would easily be affected by stars. While, elders are more robust to the changes because they have reached a stable personality. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was ten years old, I was interested in a pop music band. I tried to wear flashy clothes, just like them alongside using their catchphrases in the middle of my sentences. I continuously changed my opinion about the groups that I liked. Likewise, my look differed with the alteration of my taste as well. Nevertheless, now, I do not pay much attention to my beloved band’s way of speaking or their appearances, and I prefer to settle these affairs based on personal desires.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that getting older reduces the time a person spends on trivial things. Gradually, work becomes the main concerns of adults; not letting them focus on anything else. On the other hand, children have plenty of extra time to follow their favorite athletes’ stories. For instance, during my high school, I was a huge fan of Real Madrid football club. I read the news and interviews of the players and argued about them with my friends for hours. After going to university, I devoted my time to study more. As a result, I did not follow them like before.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that famous people have more impact on youths than adults. This is because youngsters have more flexible characteristics than older people, plus they have more spare time to follow singers or actors all the time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in brief, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0291005291 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92543912251 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7869845994 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4090909091 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144332389054 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387812540224 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356883415488 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938595203406 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443235278047 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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