Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Give suitable reasons and examples to support your answer.
I do not agree with the statement “young people enjoy life more than older people do”. In my opinion, the ability to enjoy life depends on a person’s state of mind and not his age. In this essay, I will elaborate on this topic.
Firstly, the ability to have fun may not always correlate with age. Many elders enjoy their life more than the youth around them. Since they lived in a period when cameras and smartphones were uncommon, older people like to ‘live in the moment’ and capture the moment in their memory rather than in their phones or cameras. The picture of an old woman standing in the front row to watch a parade is one of the best evidence to support this statement. In the picture, the old woman was watching the parade with a smile on her face while everyone around her was pushing each other to get the ‘perfect shot’ of the parade. In the end, she enjoyed the procession while others around her wasted their time trying to capture it on their phones.
Secondly, older people have more experience and know how to appreciate small things in life. Even though there are young people who know how to appreciate what they have, many youngsters take things for granted. The older people know that not all things last forever and try to enjoy them as long as they can.
Thirdly, older people have the resources to spend on things they enjoy. Even though money does not guarantee happiness, it does allow a person to acquire things that he enjoys. For instance, many people dream of travelling around the world to experience the world, but neither have the time nor money to fulfil this dream. Older people, however, have the time and the savings to travel the world. Even though they do not have the same level of energy as the youth, they are able to fulfil their dream to travel, while the young people continue dreaming.
In conclusion, age does not define a person’s ability to enjoy his life.
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... trying to capture it on their phones. Secondly, older people have more experie...
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...erson's ability to enjoy his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70348837209 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35271956374 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8452363604 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270920127782 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971153041328 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123102717043 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165528149543 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10361273744 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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