Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To begin with, young people are not mature enough in order to make an important decision, which is related to the future of society. In fact, they cannot distinguish what is proper and what is improper. In addition, most of the young people are not able to control themselves emotionally when they hear some interesting things. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. Last year, it was holding an election in our country in order to opt a president for four years. Before election day, on candidate told that if I choose a president, I will provide appropriate freedom for the young. Subsequently, most of the young think that they can do everything they want, As a result of that speech, they start dancing together, and do not think about the other aspect of the candidate. As a result, they miss their control just by hearing a word. For this reason, I strongly believe that the young are not able to think about all positive and negative aspect of each decision.
Secondly, the experience is an important as well as valuable thing a people could earn after a long time. In fact, due to lack of valuable experience of the young, they should not participate in the making important decision of society. It is possible that their decision brings several negative consequences for the future of society. For example, when I was an undergraduate student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I interviewed professor Nejati, who is a well-known psychologist in my country, about the effects of the decision on the future of society. He told me that, one time, the government decided to ask young people in order to invest money in which facilities of the city. Then, most of them told that it is better to construct more club for the young. After 10 years, most of them spend a great deal of their time in clubs and keep away from studying. Accordingly, the more young people participate in making an important decision, the more society will involve in the difficult situation due to the fact that they do not have enough experience to make a great decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72849462366 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70372249524 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497311827957 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3726291701 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7222222222 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147687222818 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471027398311 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406322859779 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117946491645 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102024334011 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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