It is universally cincurred that the young people are the main strong point of each society which their activities can directly advance countries in different aspects such as economics and getting access to high-technologies. I personally believe that in the past the young people were more influential than today. In the past, they were active in various fields such that they could affect on politicians to change their minds. However, nowadays, most of young people only care about themselves and they even do not have much information about their countries and politics issues. In my opinion, there are two reasons behind this which I will explore them in the following essay.
To begin with, these days the young peolpe are more selfish and do not mind what will be the future of their society and they only care about their lives. They would like to only work, travel and visit around the world, and enjoy life. They do not like to be involved in social concerns because they think social concerns are all challenging and do not worth to spend time. Moreover, nowadays, they are surrounded by different technologies which they are gravitated to. Theses technologies make the young people so busy so that they can not find time to think about their society and important decisions that their politicians make.
Moreover, the current politics do not allow the young people to enter to the field of politics easily because they believe that the young people are not experienced enough and their feelings can interfere with their political decisions. This viewpoint negatively affects on young people and might decrease the self-confidence of the few number of young people which are interested in involving with future of their society.
To sum up, nowadays, neglecting young people by politicians as well as selfishness of young people, have decreased their influence on making important decisions for the society. However, it is not correct at all and the young people are those who must manage future! Thus, young people please care about your society!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... in various fields such that they could affect on politicians to change their minds. Howe...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...ght decrease the self-confidence of the few number of young people which are interested in...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.189189189189 0.229887763892 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.164864864865 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105405405405 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0783783783784 0.046263068375 169% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0810810810811 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121621621622 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.027027027027 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59254987973 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0297297297297 0.0309702414327 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0027027027027 0.00188951952338 143% => OK
Determiners: 0.0675675675676 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243243243243 0.0209618222197 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162162162162 0.0139019557991 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2064.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 340.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07058823529 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341176470588 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232352941176 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173529411765 0.174417080927 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129411764706 0.112833075102 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59254987973 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497058823529 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.4636553187 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6666666667 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0112776261 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.6 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.9019607843 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.04166666667 1.45489161554 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368529693078 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138385282104 0.103427244359 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0807018021353 0.0752933317313 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.574468590332 0.497263757937 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.13125569908 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166737340514 0.114077575197 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105864513787 0.0781384742642 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.443147057915 0.336927656856 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00620093077784 0.067059652881 9% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295367118995 0.210909579961 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820896225854 0.0618886996521 133% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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