Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this step of era which everything require knowledge, talent, and power young generation are the fundamental base of a society by whom a society can be stood on its own feet. in my own idea, young people as the base of a society have the most influence on the decisions that determine the future of their society. following paragraphs fully demonstrates why I think this way.
First of all, young individuals are the work power of a society which can lead to the development of a society. along the history, we witness that these were the young people who caused the collapse or development of a society, which reveals that if young people who are well educated and equipped with full knowledge and strength take any decision toward development of their country, such county will be soon developed. as an example, my classmates are young people who are talented and educated as well as students in our neighbor class. they have ideas about betterment of economy situation in our city. like these we have hundred thousand of such young people. if these people leave our country and try to work in foreign countries, so our country will remain ruin and undeveloped. Therefore, these young people as work power have a high influence in future of our society.
Secondly, the great number of young generation indicates that they can determine their future by voting. every individual have the right to vote, so in this case young generation can play an extremely important role in determining their future which is considered by the most politicians as an undeniable fact. my own experience is a compelling example of this. one of my friend who is young nominated himself in provincial council election last year. all the people told him that he will not pass the election to enter the provincial council, but we (young individuals) make this possible with our day-night efforts and endeavors. now he is one member of the provincial council election who advocate the young generation rights.
in the conclusion, I am of the idea that young people have influence on important decisions that determine the future of a society. I think this way because young generation are the work power of a nation, therefore considered as an important portion, and because the number of young people affect the results of important decision-making process across the country like elections.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74603236507 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6471646774 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.722222222 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238313535151 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092090914877 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763976623181 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171850202673 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398853921633 0.0645574589148 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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