Do you agree or disagree with the following
statement?
it is better to have broad knowledge of
many academic subjects than to specialize in
one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to
support your answer.
To answer this question it seems to be
necessary to make clear, for what aspect of life
the knowledge in general should be good. On
the one hand you might think that knowledge
should be useful for the success in your job
or at school. On the other hand you maybe
understand knowledge as a part of the human
existence, that allows us to think critically and
to reflect about our life which includes the
whole environment surrounding us.
I want to respond the question from the
second point of view. Knowledge has to be
understood as much more than the ability to
function in a special kind of business environment.
Knowledge is the sum of all the
theoretical facts and experiences a human
being collects during his or her whole life.
And from this position a knowledge as broad
as possible must be accepted as the better
alternative.
I think that it will become a very big
problem in our society when we continue to
concentrate the whole educational system —
especially the schools — only on teaching
specific subjects. Of course it is actually is very
important for young people to have the right
preparation for the business world. But as I
already said, life must focus on much more
than the economic aspect.
Even if you think that the preparation
for the business world should be the main
aspect of acquiring knowledge, you should still
agree with the statement, because when you
really analyse the requirements of work that
are typical in our time, you will realize that
the technologies and the methods change so
quickly, that it would be a very big mistake to
concentrate on a specific subject. You would
always have the danger that if you concentrate
on a specialized part of human knowledge,
that part might become completely unimportant
in the nearest future. Nowadays it seems
to be useful to be able to program computers.
Yet in some years computers might have the
ability to program themselves.
When you have a broad knowledge than
you will be able to handle all the new things
that you might get confronted with. And you
will not only be able to handle them — but you
will have the possibility to fully understand
them and take part in their development. Not
only as a passive part but as a creator of your
own future
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...er whole life. And from this position a knowledge as broad as possible must be accepted...
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...nt for young people to have the right preparation for the business world. But as I alre...
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...hat it would be a very big mistake to concentrate on a specific subject. You would alwa...
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... the ability to program themselves. When you have a broad knowledge than you w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, really, second, so, still, as to, i think, in general, kind of, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01256281407 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65130623693 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469849246231 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6107311366 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.352941176 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4117647059 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 51.0 4.53405017921 1125% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204080002202 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627094464093 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480092843128 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430498138399 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565212130424 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.