No one can deny the fact that people frequently face various problems in their lives ranging from professional problems to personal issues. On that ground, sometimes people might not get a clear solution for the problems they face in their lives. In this regard, many people contend that human minds are very intelligent, and so, they can find every solution by utilizing their minds in the right place. On the other side, there are people who believe that it is better to ask others when one cannot find the answer for oneself. Certainly, from my vantage point, the latter view contains more weight. For the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that although dependency is not good for anyone in life, taking advice for own sake might prove beneficial often time. To be more specific, there are times when other people can have more experience than us as they have lived through different colors of lives wherein those phases taught them to think from a different perspective which we might not be able to speculate at the certain scenarios. Consequently, at such times, they can guide better when people have confronted issues. My own life’s example can make better sense to what has been elaborated above. Last year, I have invested a lot of money in cryptocurrency. it is not that I have started investing money in recent years, however, when the government in my country banned cryptocurrency last month, I became very nervous. Even, I could not think about any solutions whereby I could get my money back. Nonetheless, when I discussed my issue with my cousin who lived in another country, he suggested transferring all my money to another currency in order to save my money in the form of cryptocurrency. Ultimately, had I not taken advice from my cousin, I would have lost all my money which could be very disastrous in my life.
Another noteworthy reason is that irrefutably when people are in a difficult situation, their ability to utilize their knowledge as well as their experience can be diminished. This is because some issues are very sensitive to them which causes a lot of emotional breakdowns in their lives. On the contrary, other people with whom we are not directly connected can give a better suggestion. To exemplify, in 2015, when the doctor suggested operating my grandmother with Angioplasty urgently since she had a heart attack earlier. Surprisingly, although studied as a medical student, I started feeling helpless at that time. Fortunately, my cousin who was also a medical student was there in the hospital with me and supported me mentally. He patiently handled all scenarios and asked me to give further permission to the cardiologist in order to save my grandmother. Admittedly, according to their incidence, it is judicious to say I could neither handle the situation nor save my grandmother if my cousin did not help me at right time.
All in all, from contemplating all remarks, even though some people may not agree with my viewpoint, I strongly believe that people should ask for advice from others when they feel the necessity to do so. This is because many times other human beings can be good consultants for us due to having more experienced, and they can manage the situation properly rather than us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2814.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 569.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94551845343 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77184046625 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497363796134 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 884.7 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5022721117 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.56 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.76 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136546176676 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406663344655 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475539346911 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968346535031 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038673562772 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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