No one can denny the fact that people frequently face various problems in thier lives ranging from professional problems to personal issues. On that ground, sometimes people might get difficulty to get a clear solution for the problems they face in their lives. In this regard, many people contend that human minds are very intelligent, and so, they can find every soltions by utilising their mind at right place. On the other side, there are people who believe that it is better to ask others when one cannot find answer for ownself. Certainly, from my vantage point, the latter view contains more weight. For the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and example justifying my stance.
The first exqusite point to be mentioned is that although dependacy is not a good for anyone in the life, taking advice for own sake might prove beneficial often time. To be more specific, there are times when other people can have more experience than us as they have lived through different colors of lives wherein those phases tought them to think from different prospective which we might not able to spectulate at certain scenario. Consequently, at such times, they can guide us better in order to avoid further problems in the life. My own life’s example can make better sense to what has been elaborated above. Last year, I have invested a lot of money in cryptocurrency. it is not that I have started investing money in recent years, however, when the governement in my country banned cryptocurrency last month, I became very nervous. Even, I could not think about any solution whereby I could get my money back. Nonetheless, when I discussed my issue with my cousin who lived in the other country, suggested me to tranfer all my money to other currency in order to save my money in the form of cryptocurrency. Ultimately, had I not took advice from my cousin, I would have lost all of my money which could be very distasterous in my life.
Another noteworthy reason is that irrefutably, when people are in difficult situation, their ability to utilise their knowledge as well as their experience can be diminished. This is because some issues are very sensitive to them which cause a lot of emotional breakdown in their lives. On the contrary, other people whom we are not directly connected can give a better suggestion. To exemplify, when I found that my grandmother had undergone a heart attack and doctor suggested me to operate her with Angioplasty on emergency base. Surprisingly, depsite studied as a medical students, I started feeling like helpess at that time. Fortunately, my cousin who was also a medical student was there in the hospital with me and supported me mentally. He patiently handled all the scenario and asked me to give further permission to cardiologist in order to save my grandmother. Amittedly, according to their incidence, it is judicious to say I could neither handled the situation nor saved my gradmother if my cousin did not help me at right time.
All in all, from contemplating all remarks, even though some people may not agree with my view point, I strongly believe that people must need to take advice from others when they feel necessity to do so. This is because many times other human beings can be a good consultant for us due to having more experienced, and they can manage the situation properly rather than us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...prisingly, depsite studied as a medical students, I started feeling like helpess at that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, well, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 77.0 43.0788530466 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2818.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 581.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85025817556 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73607956674 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497418244406 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.0 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8947758284 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.72 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.24 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141730119026 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041489229039 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441776403601 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941211024453 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284076691915 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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