do you agree or disagree?
It is better to work as a team or as an individual.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that success is a thing everybody thrives for. In this regard, hard work for a successful life is of paramount importance. There has been no shortage of debate among scholars whether working as a team or as an individual leads to success. As for the writer's opinion, I subscribe to the idea of working together in a group is better to succeed. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first compelling reason corroborating my idea is that working as a team really motivates me to do hard work for accomplishment. Partners encourage themselves when they fail on their path to success. It is crystal clear that team members help each other when someone is having difficulty understanding. They work efficiently and effectively by operating together. Vividly, the mentioned point can only be reached by teamwork. By way of illustration, I and my friend Attia are currently preparing for the TOEFL exam. It is a tough test and requires a lot of determination. Whenever we feel lost, we talk and motivate each other to prepare for the task to pass the test. Getting a passing score on this test is very important for us since it will help to obtain a Pharmacist License. Now we are almost ready to take the test by learning together with the help of each other. This would not have possible if I were studying alone. Attia truly persuaded me to achieve my goal.
The second rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that different people have different perspectives in their minds. When people are working in an alliance, they get to know various ideas and can choose the best approach. It is worth mentioning that in a team, diverse people contribute so their thinking also varied which really assists in reaching success. As a case in mind, 5 years ago I started a business with my two seniors of high school. Their experience and diversity literally aided me to take vital decisions about enhancing my business. It's been a year since we are recognized as the top businessmen of New Jersey. If I started that business as an individual, it would not be possible to succeed.
By perusing the above paragraphs, one can infer that although a person's secrets sometimes result in their rise but working together in partnership really make success possible. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating: first, teamwork helps in motivation, secondly, different ideas of team members lead to a great outcome. As for writer's advice, I vehemently urge people to work as a union. By doing so, success will be in their hands.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...individual leads to success. As for the writers opinion, I subscribe to the idea of wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, as for, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7943107221 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81812419834 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549234135667 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9216757577 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.25 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3214285714 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159454803017 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407852497936 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585753733312 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104670126112 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411096310787 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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