Do you agree or disagree? Life is today easier and more comfortable than when your grandparents were a child.
The world we live in has changed drastically during the last half-century. The way of living is entirely a diverse thing than it was last decades. There have been fierce debates among people whether today’s life is more comfortable and easier than past or not. some people are inclined toward the opinion that in our modernized life, with its fast pace, people enjoy welfare and well-being and so forth. Nonetheless, others contend that new generations are involved with hectic life. I, for one, subscribe to the former group on account of conspicuous reasons. technology advancement, healthfulness and various entertainments are three of which with greater importance.
The first exquisite reason that makes me hold the belief is that technology has played a prevailing role as far as welfare and comfort of societies concerns. In today’s life, technology has been improved significantly in various fields such as invention of computers, factory machines, medical apparatus, to name but a few. it is crystal clear that this improvement has enhanced different the level of various social strata’s life. To illustrate, people were trouble keeping in touch with people who lived far away, sending a letter might be received or not. These days, thanks to advent technology people communicate with their relatives through email, Skype, so on via internet and computers.
Another reason deserving some words here is that taking consideration to health life. improvement of healthy and surgery equipment has excelled the curing process in the past decades. Unfortunately, all injuries or wounds were not curable in grandparents’ era so that morality of infants ascend according to statistics. Perhaps an example can shed more light on the matter. I recall my grandmother telling me about her child was a girl, have never lived. They were living in a village far from medical centers. A lack of hospitals her town triggered me not to see her at all. Indeed, healthiness and comfort has boosted during past years.
Last but not least, attendance of technology provides different kinds of entertainments which were not in the ancestors’ era. Grandparents spent excess time on working since absence of recreation. Now days, people are obsessed with games, cinemas, parks, no name but a few. enhance, people relive stress and live with happiness and joyousness.
In assumption, pursuant I mentioned above, one can realize that contemporary live in more comfort and convenience since quality of life , development of technology and miscellaneous amusement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nonetheless, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41439205955 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06129183439 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610421836228 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9921254999 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.28 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.12 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165024011389 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407380347656 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488326060355 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899808192959 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320633970133 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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