Do you agree or disagree?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Some people argue that childhood of our ancestors were more convenient and comfy as compare with our life today. They cite that people of 21st century are more stress due to hectic daily schedule, and life have become a full of obstacles. However, I strongly disagree with these people and I believe that lifestyle of today is more comfy, easier and relevant than our elderly. I support my viewpoint with two reasons.
To begin with, life of this contemporary era has become comfortable than our veteran because of advancement in technology such as internet, television etc. For instance, we can call our families and friends whenever, we want to talk with them, but our veteran cannot imagine of this when they were child. Moreover, the advancement in transportation has also boost the lifestyle of modern people than early age people. For example, my grandmother often share her strange story about her struggle due to lack of infrastructures. She had to walked through a forest for 4 days in barefoot just for going shopping to buy a salt and other basic goods. It is important to advancement in technology because technology is a device which enhances the comfort zone of normal people. Thus, advancement in technologies have make more influences in modern age people.
Furthermore, in spite technologies bought a lots of issues such as environment pollution which emits a detrimental gases and causes of numerous diseases, scientists have done lots of research to improve our health and they have invented gigantic methods and drugs to cure our illness. For instance, recently scientist have developed a technology where human heart was transplanted by pig heart. Today, medical science has discovered the cure for most detrimental diseases, while people at early stage used to die even by Diarrhea and tuberculosis. This advancement of medical science safe as compare to our grandmother early ages.
To sum up, the issue of whether a life of today is easier or childhood of our veteran is complex. Some suggested that early period was awesome because they don't have to take pressure of these hectic and mundane lifestyle. Nevertheless, I still contend that lavish lifestyle of modern people today is easier because of mainly advancement in modern technologies such as internet, health sectors etc.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'boosted'.
Suggestion: boosted
... advancement in transportation has also boost the lifestyle of modern people than ear...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...odern age people. Furthermore, in spite technologies bought a lots of issues suc...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...thermore, in spite technologies bought a lots of issues such as environment pollution...
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Suggestion:
... veteran is complex. Some suggested that early period was awesome because they do...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... early period was awesome because they dont have to take pressure of these hectic a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12466843501 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84757121938 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9108852032 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155100208009 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522594231317 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524988654398 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103542186733 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582941211394 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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