Do you agree or disagree that people these days don't want to have children
Yasmin Harp
Here is one of my independent essay
It is undeniable that kids and money are the most crucial elements in humans' lives. However, I believe that people these days lose their desire to have children and even if they do, they will have the minimum number of children maybe one or two. In contrast, in the past people have a lot of children. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To start, women in the past used to stay home and had nothing to fulfill their time with. As a result, when they got married they thought about having children and raising them. However, on these days women start enrolling in college and completing their degrees, after that they try working and earning money. Having children is not one of their top priorities anymore. The comparison between my situation and my grandmother's is a compelling example of this. My grandmother Rasmia got married when she was seventeen and had her first child when she turned eighteen. Those days all her friends in the village had the same experience as her. When she tured thirty she had eight children. When I asked her how did she manage to raise all of them, she explained that was her only mission and she enjoyed it and preoccupied herself with her children. For my I am twenty-nine years old and still trying to figure out how I can complete my studying while I am working in the pharmacy. I have never though about having children because I do not find time to do so.
Moreover, raising a child before is way easier than these days. unlike in the past, In todays' societies, life is expensive and many families cannot afford having children. Back to my grandmother's example. She lived in a poor neighborhood and people used to help each other, so if one of them had food they would share with the whole neighborhood. She did not need to worry about feeding her kids or where they would live. It was very simple task to have land and a house sometimes without paying a dollar you can find land and live their. On the other hand, in modern society this is not the case. For example, me and my husband are working and we bareky can pay the rent and the food. Whenever we think about having a child we calculate our budget to see if we can provide this child with the financial security that he needs, almost immediately, we change our mind because we cannot tolerate that expense.
To sum up, I strongly think that having children today is way less important than before. Not only because women on these days are preoccupaied with tone of things and having a child is not a requirement to fill their time, but also families cannot afford having children.
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...r time, but also families cannot afford having children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, i feel, in contrast, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54639175258 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3825864173 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509278350515 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4037420461 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8076923077 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6538461538 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34615384615 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223588600771 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680403759369 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846039796078 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137277271919 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914421771397 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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