It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours

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... working on a lengthy three days a week.At first, it wasnt convenient for me due t...
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...egion where I had to work for five days.If i hadnt been around at the time the in...
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...daho chapters shows that people who have good mental state of health are those th...
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...ntal state of health are those that work extensively for three days a week, becau...
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... is away from work, and this has really bolster her mental health because she never had...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while, as to, i feel, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67804878049 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82197958335 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 102.0 20.1344086022 507% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 350.386483044 48.9658058833 716% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 479.5 100.406767564 478% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 102.5 20.6045352989 497% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 5.45110844103 504% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.5376344086 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304708523518 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173912284419 0.076458572812 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716479997004 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174346461104 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714037645491 0.0645574589148 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.9 11.7677419355 441% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.59 58.1214874552 -41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.10430107527 260% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 41.9 10.1575268817 413% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.05 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.85 8.01818996416 148% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 42.8 10.0537634409 426% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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