It is beneficial for people to spend some time living in a country where they must speak a foreign language. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, it is very common for people to live abroad, far from their country of origin. The question is whether it is beneficial to live in a country where we must communicate in a foreign language. Personally, I believe that it is not advantageous to live in such an environment. I will explore the reasons why I feel this way in the following essay.
To begin with, we often feel lonely and isolated if we have to use a foreign language to communicate. When we speak in a second language, we aren’t always able to express exactly what we want to say. Sometimes our communication is limited to basic phrases that don’t really carry much nuance. As a result, we can fail to form meaningful connections with the people around us. In the long run, this can cause sadness and depression. Deep conversations are not particularly important for tourists, but they are critical for people residing in a country for a long time. For instance, my brother spent six months living in Germany right after his graduation from university, and he said that he was only able to form superficial relationships with the people in his neighborhood. He tried his best to deeply connect with them, but it was impossible due to his limited ability to express himself.
On top of that, language difficulties can make it nearly impossible to accomplish normal everyday tasks. In situations where comprehension is important, like when we talk to a teacher or government official, strong language skills are important. A few misunderstood words could make it extremely challenging to do something that seems simple, like paying a parking ticket or enrolling in a university class. As a result, we might end up wasting a lot of time or even having to pay money for a translator. When we are living far from our family and native environment, this can make our lives very impractical. In contrast, in our own country (or a country that shares its language) these tasks are much easier to accomplish. In such an environment it is much easier to make progress in our personal and professional lives.
To sum it up, living in a country where we are required to speak a second language can be very challenging so I don’t think it is always advantageous to move to a foreign country. This is because it might cause us to feel emotional distress, and it can be difficult to carry out simple tasks in our daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...ail to form meaningful connections with the people around us. In the long run, this can cause sadnes...
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Line 6, column 311, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...rds could make it extremely challenging to do something that seems simple, like payin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, so, for instance, i feel, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75059952038 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93110708769 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.653917233 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2054364635 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607474327652 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635546393208 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135620720517 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494442148398 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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