Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors.
Education is one of the most striking topic in modern society. Some people claim that universities should spend more money in buying facilities than hiring famous professors. From my perspective, university is a place where the professors impart knowledge to students to expand their horizon. At the same time, the university is a place where should offer students more professional academic environment to do a research or investigate. So, in my opinion, spending money in buying facilities or in hiring famous professors should allocate equally.
A university will be more attractive by introducing a well-known professor. For example, in my college there is a professor who can make the boring subject vividly and the hard work easy to understand. Students love to attend his courses and always put heart and soul into the ocean of knowledge. So he is the most popular teacher in our college, even a person who don’t study in my college wants to go to the class of the professor. You can see that how charming the professor is, it makes university more attractive.
However, it’s also important that universities should buy advanced equipment to offer students and professors a comfortable and professional academic environment. For instance, in my college, the biology laboratory introduce a equipment which can analysis a sample of blood to provide the popular professor to do a research of human disease. Without this facility the professor cannot continue the research which he is addicted to, even he might job-hopping to another university where supply the advanced equipment to finish his research, which lead to a great loss of the university.
In summary, universities should pay money on buying facilities or hiring famous professors equally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...llege, the biology laboratory introduce a equipment which can analysis a sample o...
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
... to provide the popular professor to do a research of human disease. Without this facility...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, well, for example, for instance, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29432624113 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02889401993 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539007092199 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7859371512 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299601384011 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127344522461 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161029919873 0.0737576698707 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226709130709 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152134741219 0.0645574589148 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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