do you agree or disagree with the statements:people often buy products not because they really need them but because other people have them.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people&apos
In recent decades,people's living condition has improved a lot ....
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Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...os;s living condition has improved a lot .everyone can purchase the things they wa...
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Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or different reasons.from my perspective , i think the motivation of purchasing ei...
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Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...different reasons.from my perspective , i think the motivation of purchasing eith...
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...e motivation of purchasing either comes form the need of them or the envy of other p...
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Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...m and the former takes a bigger accounts . For instance ,in my dorm, my roommate...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...takes a bigger accounts . For instance ,in my dorm, my roommates always buy the ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lways buy the products they really needs .when they need to wash their clothes the...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...need them and the products are necessary ,without it ,you can not do the daily stu...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...d the products are necessary ,without it ,you can not do the daily stuffs.and this...
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ake the most part of one's living. However things may become different in sometime...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...things may become different in sometimes,one of my roommates brought an iPad,and it ...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...imes,one of my roommates brought an iPad,and it is really useful,he use it to watch ...
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Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
... brought an iPad,and it is really useful,he use it to watch some videos and play so...
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Line 3, column 569, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...ught an iPad,and it is really useful,he use it to watch some videos and play some g...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...o watch some videos and play some games.To be honestly,it's functions is just...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it&apos
...ideos and play some games.To be honestly,it's functions is just sounds like a phone...
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Line 3, column 679, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...;s functions is just sounds like a phone,so there is no need for everyone buy such ...
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Line 3, column 894, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of my roommates buy a iPad either.when i come to ask the reasons why he brought ...
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Line 3, column 1067, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...menon is not frequent in my college life,but it still sometimes happen.i think the r...
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Line 3, column 1098, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lege life,but it still sometimes happen.i think the reason of this reason for pur...
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Line 3, column 1157, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...of this reason for purchasing is due to the their curiosity of the products and envy of o...
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Line 3, column 1246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ther people already have possessed them.But there is a prerequisite requirements,th...
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Line 3, column 1274, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'requirement'?
Suggestion: requirement
...sessed them.But there is a prerequisite requirements,the thing must be affordable,otherwise ...
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Line 3, column 1286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...But there is a prerequisite requirements,the thing must be affordable,otherwise they...
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Line 3, column 1315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , otherwise
...equirements,the thing must be affordable,otherwise they wouldn't buy it. So ,to sum...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...therwise they wouldn't buy it. So ,to sum up，the willing of shopping either...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... possessed them.but as a sensible people ,most of them would buy the products they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, if, look, may, really, so, still, for instance, i think, kind of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97160883281 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07229543236 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 20.1344086022 392% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.442069642 48.9658058833 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.0 100.406767564 392% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.25 20.6045352989 385% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.75 5.45110844103 454% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344010854963 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254188505097 0.076458572812 332% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905748005009 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283592991306 0.150856017488 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717788760546 0.0645574589148 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.6 11.7677419355 354% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 58.1214874552 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 10.1575268817 324% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.73 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.01818996416 131% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.0537634409 334% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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