Every person wants happiness in life, happiness come when we success in life and we have well social life. Job is not give happiness but money receive from the job is most prominent factor for happiness in life. However, social life also gives happiness but without job, person cannot achieve his happiness even with social life. Job give us to money, so we fulfill our dream by job, maintains dignity in our society and also it give us opportunity to meet various people and make friends.
To begin with, success is prime factor for happiness, if a person is success in life then, he definitely happy in life. Job is first step toward the success, a person can earn money by job and fulfill his fundamental need. The person can do it what he want with money. For an example, I work in pharmaceutical company as manager and earn huge money. Every year, my family member and I travel new country. I have my own house, car, and sufficient bank balance for my future. I buy whatever things which are I want. I completed whole whishes of my parents. We living in together and enjoying each moment of life without struggling in life, so, happiness is come from the money and money come from the job. That a reason, job bringing happiness.
Furthermore, job also give chance to meet new people and making friend. Sharing feeling, ideas, and experience with friends also one kind of happiness. But it is possible when a person do something in life. A person without job has no value in society but when he started work then everyone has respect to him and understands his value. For an instance, two years ago, my cousin finished his graduation in pharmacy field, after graduation he did not work and whole time spend on watch television and pass time with friends, gradually pass time, then no one can like him because of all people negative thought about him like he is lazy boy and not doing any work. After one year, he also felt that without work no one respect me and he seeking job and finally he met the job. Now, he works in pharmacy store with good salary. This story meaning that people nonetheless without job.
While, some people believe that social life give us happiness. When a person has friend and family he feels happy and he can enjoy life. It is true that happiness come from social life but in real life social life connect with because of your status in society and money, Without money no one stand with the person. Some ancient says that poor people has no friend. This meaning that money is everything and if person need money, he must has to work or job.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reason, job associate with success, money, and social networking which are contributes happiness in the person life. That are reasons, I certainly agree with statement that happiness come through the job rather than social life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...ains dignity in our society and also it give us opportunity to meet various people a...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...ntal need. The person can do it what he want with money. For an example, I work in p...
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Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I buy whatever things which are I want. I completed whole whishes of my parents. ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'seeks'.
Suggestion: seeks
...t without work no one respect me and he seeking job and finally he met the job. Now, he...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng that people nonetheless without job. While, some people believe that social life g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, as to, in brief, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2352.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64822134387 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38164514404 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446640316206 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.3197957226 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1034482759 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4482758621 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8275862069 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249047496767 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756431713665 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763707348593 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173623951003 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682310138165 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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