Do you prefer to have realistic goals or ambitious goals in life.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of setting realistic goals. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely prefer to set realistic goals in my life. It is my firm belief that having realistic goals always makes one’s life more practical for a number of reasons, and I will develop my ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, setting realistic dreams in life always help people to cope the unfavourable circumstances. A person’s life is full of uncertainties; and he could easily lose hope at such unpredictable times of his life if he has not already found a practical solution of them. Besides, these goals guide people to move forward towards a predetermined direction and insure them that they will overcome their difficulties. I have to admit that my own opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. My husband works in USA and he has to commute everyday so we already had set a plan that we would have moved to USA by the February 2020. Just before we were planning to move, pandemic started and borders get closed. It was a critical time for our moving, as we already gave notice for leaving the house. Fortunately, my husband already informed his company about his move. So, his company assisted us to get a permission letter from border authorities. As a result, we came to our destination without any further trouble. For this reason, having a realistic dream permitted my family to make our migration possible, even in pandemic situation.
Secondly, practicality motivates us to do hard work and overcomes temporary constraints, which is always fruitful in the end. Drawing from my friend’s experience. She was a foreign Pharmacy graduate, and she has her disabled parents, who were living with her. In a nutshell, she had a great deal of responsibilities, but she has always planned for taking her licensing exam. She tried and failed two consecutive years, but she did not lose hope and continued to be worked hard to achieve her goals. Moreover, she did not let her circumstances to be a hurdle, in her way, of getting her dream and one by one she overcame all her hardships, as now she is a registered pharmacist in United States of America. It is certainly clear that her continuous struggle to achieve her truthful goal never demotivated her and never let her felt discouragement. It was a long run for her but, in the end, she was rewarded with success.
In the light of above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that setting realistic goals in life provides the strength to face the unplanned realities of life and it also demonstrates the virtues of hard work to fulfil the ambition
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83731019523 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92367898304 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548806941432 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2671966509 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9565217391 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184496647468 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542333718609 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781947293236 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153231700295 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096330412281 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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