Some. People prefer to eat their food at home while other prefer going to restaurants, which one would you prefer.
Though there is no shortage of idea about where to serve meals, it mostly depends on individuals' choice. Most people tend to eat their foods outdoors others indoors; however, when it comes to me, personally, I would prefer my dishes to be in restaurants rather be homemade. I feel this way for two days reasons, which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, eating at restaurants is more fun than eating at homes as we may meet new people and visit new environments. When we go to restaurants to serve our meals, there we may get lucky to meet new people and to become new friends, or we can go to restaurants with our friends and sweethearts. There we can share our sadness, happiness and our memories which will be very enjoyable than eating alone at our homes. It is also an excellent chance to visit new environments, majestic raturants; there may be playing pieces of music. For it's more fun to serve in the same ground in our homes, in which we have done our foods since our childhood.
Secondly, by eating in restaurants, we can save either our money and time. Albeit many people think that it is cheaper and more time sever to cook in their own homes but to contemplate deeper, we will notice that cooking takes more money and time: going to the grocery store for providing the ingredients for cooking, washing the dishes, proving gases and other fuels to cook our meals. It not only costs more money but also takes more time. Last year, for instance, when I was living alone, I had a full-time job, so whenever I wanted to cook on my own, It took too much time to purchase the needed ingredients and, cooking, and washing the dishes; hence, it was far better for me to serve my foods at restaurants. Had not I go to restaurants, I would have not my job due to lack of time.
To put them all in a nutshell, I firmly believe that eating restaurant_made foods are not only more enjoyable but also it's more affordable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53521126761 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58961348398 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3434135226 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3571428571 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203646468786 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692048759209 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721424620776 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12164362708 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530922941346 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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