Do you prefer outdoor activity or indoor?
Benefits and drawbacks of free activities has been a controversial issue in the community lately. While some people argue that they constitute a number of undeniable advantages. Although they have several pros and cons, ı am of the opinion that outdoor activities offer numerous social affects and health advantages that shouldn't be ignored. I will elucidate the detail of my support with some tangible detail and examples in the following paragraphs.
Outdoor activities have numerous social advantages. Today many people work long hours in a day that are felt uncomfortable. People do some outdoor activities in order to find social relationships which is known trekking. This should be hard condition who may feel tired. When people do it which can discovery their limits. Because of trekking features, they see new places. Not only there are mountain roads or lake tour, but also urban or rural walking. Whatever do it, people spend enjoyable times. Although ıt can be tired, they feel comfortable. Because many of bad thinks will gone far away from them. Their bodies are relax.
Secondly, outdoor activities may be a solution for health problems. Especially in the urban, people study too hard. For this reason, they can not take enough time to activities. Since people say that people have to do sport for their health. İf they do not enough sport, they may take heart attack or spasm.Acording to science people's research in which people of percentage 25 are find higher risky group. Nowadays, outdoor activities are important people life. İt may be a part of people routine habits. İf people do walking or running in the nature, they breathe clean air. İt concludes pure oxygen which contributes to cleaning blood. Because it transports hemoglobin cells so that continue to human life. On the other hand, outdoor activities provides condition that can be helpful in different activities. Many people think that they are god source of oxygen and natural life.
Proponents of outdoor activity claim that it is better for the health. Some people support that spend leisure time indoors. Opponents of outdoors argue that it may take more time than estimated time. However, I am at discordant with these statements. Invalidate their claim with these statements. Because outdoor activities are benefit working people. Since people claim that outdoor sport activity has advantages among the other activities.
As a summary, people prefer to spend their free time outdoors overcome to daily routine. Other side, it contributes health life. If people do sport regularly, they perceive weel solution to any problem. Furthermore, people get to socialize day by day when do outdoors activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24193548387 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.650780212 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52534562212 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1379491918 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.8684210526 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4210526316 20.6045352989 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224652724002 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631824990281 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745781520617 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147586075771 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325707733348 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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