The construction of a movie theater in the neighborhood has some drawbacks. Do you agre or disagree?
For the last ten years, small cities has experienced some progressive changes which affects the daily life largely. Especially, city population increased double since 2000s,and cities getting crowded than last century. As a result of this changes, people have new tendency trend. While some people argue that movie theater have numerous advantages, others maintain that it has a number of undeniable drawbacks. Although both sides have several pros and cross, I am of the opinion that movie theater offer numerous social and economical advantages that should not be ignore. I will elucidate the details of my support with some tangible details and example in the following paragraphs.
Some people believe that build a new movie theater in the neighborhood may initiate some security problems in city. According to them, many people, who are known stranger to them, come city from the outside of the town. They may have different purposes which are related movie theater or other activities.In deed, criminal rate may increase with steadily level that it creates negative impacts over the societies. I am fully disparate thinking which is regarding security problems. Because, movie theater will observe a private security firm in order to reliable for people. They have lots of technological devices which are security cameras, detector, drone and about communications. They can control movie theater areas during 24 hours. Additionally, local police forces responsible routine controls in movie theater which may more secure than other parts of city. Other side, a new movie theater has economical advantage for people. Many cafe and shopping center may open, so they need new worker; It contributes new employment areas. Workers and business owners are benefit mutual.
As a consequence, security is the main problem in the movie theater debate. It has many advantage for settled who may work in movie theater. It has not only economical advantages, but also there is social advantage. People pass on enjoyable time movie theater where it may well-being point in city. Thanks to safety precautions, children-adults can spend time in confidante.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37869822485 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72659742752 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58875739645 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9094756134 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212935813816 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670151434969 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710787764684 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14946358235 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010789933701 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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