During our careers, we work with many different kinds of people. All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits. In your opinion, which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker?
a serious attitude regarding their work obligations
a willingness to learn new things
the ability to make other people laugh
there can be many qualities which a person should carry in order to be called as a perfect candidate.However, for being a the best employee one just needs few qualities. personally, I believe a worker should be punctilious. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, a responsible person always inspires the people around him, which makes others to strive to become like him. A person who always do his work on time, reach the designated place before the deadline exhorts other people to be like the responsible person. For instance, five years ago, when I was in school there was a boy in my standard and was also the topper of the standard. The boy worked hard in academics and scored good marks and apart from it also was able to finish the assignments on time and was never late to school. His such punctuality always motivated me to be like him and always complete my work on time. As a result, by seeing him I found myself improving and eventually, learned the habit of being punctual. Therefore, I believe we should be surrounded by responsible people.
Secondly, in company of the responsible person we always stay away from problems, which can help us avoid penalties. The person who follows a routine without any deviation also makes others to follow the routine to complete the work and always demand perfection from others making others to work hard. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, I was assigned a project with other three team members. Our team lead was a very exacting personality and demanded everything perfect and on time. The fear of facing any penalties from him made me do all the assigned work on time and with utmost precision. Hence, the team leader's strictness helped us in completing the project before deadline. If I would have not got an exacting leader, I would have not completed my work on time and may have faced the consequences.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the best trait a worker can have is seriousness of doing his work. this is because he inspires other members and because by staying with the punctilious person can help avoid many difficulties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77922077922 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71112846885 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.680542095 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15217373078 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491595064881 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329436266498 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987972461098 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331068049656 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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