Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that today's children are more clever, creative and also, very curious because of their access to the new technology. Therefore, educating them on the classes are more difficult for teachers than it was in the past. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that educational situation is not very unlike that past time and this claim is just for the negative view of society to the technology. I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that today educating students are more challenging for teachers than it was in the past.
First and foremost, today most of the children have the cell phone and contrast to the policy of schools often they used from their cell phone even in the classroom. The first and major problem is the distraction, usually, during class, they are playing games or are download videoes or movies and etc. it is led to, they can not concentrate on the teacher's lecture. This condition can be affected even other students who do not costume from their cell phone on the class. On the other hand, because of new laws that avoided teachers for punishing on the class teachers have a lower control of the class circumstances.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that accessibility of children to the social and cyclopedias Web sites led to increasing their information and they're curious about everything and sometimes it is difficult for teachers to answer all of their questions. Unfortunately, sometimes children learn and know about issues that this is not suitable for their age condition. consequently, the educational system should be thinking about adopting education materials to can protecting children from this social harmful effects.
Finally, yet importantly, today, graunting the safety of tests are becoming hard and harder. because access to this instrument the possibility of fraud is very higher and easier than past. Not only fraud through cell phone is very easy but children by a quick search in the networking websites can be finding a lot of new ways for frauding.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that regulating classes and managing the educational system in the presence of new social relationship devices are very problematic. because of several challenges that for teaching, controlling and protecting children at the schools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, so, still, therefore, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09367088608 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78189029899 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501265822785 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7813273053 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.352941176 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247091485841 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817563044614 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517889396016 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13160228779 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391228492061 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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