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equal financial support for sport as education

People all around the world have various needs and for the response to them, they can choose and select different approaches and actions for reacting to them. I believe that everybody needs education feed and sports activities along together. In my opinion, the universities must receive equal financial support for sport as education not only such activities had a great influence on the health of students but also made them motivate and active in the learning of educational staff.

The first and most exquisite reason is that it's a great way for the curriculums of colleges that could have a plan for sports and social activities, this kind of plans made the students healthy in body and mind. For example, I have twine cousin in two different colleges, one of them is so obese and another is so healthy and energetic. I think the curriculum of their college has an important role in his health.

Another reason which deserves some words here is that sports and some social movements improve the personality and communication of the students. Sports and staff like it can motivate the student with enthusiasm for learning and consequently success in communication with self-confidence and a positive effect on the social life.

From what has been discussed above I believe that sports and social activities need equal financial support as classes and libraries, because of the value of both mind and body.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...first and most exquisite reason is that its a great way for the curriculums of coll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03829787234 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73741740544 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582978723404 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.955108828 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.555555556 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.45110844103 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37743487754 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135447417738 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112359184939 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208277674169 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110982994298 0.0645574589148 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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