Essay topics: No one should expect to have privacy in the internet age.
issue
1)rights of individual
2) national secret
3) benefits of information
There have been pros and cons regarding the argument that no one should expect to have privacy in internet age.
While both sides may have their own reasons to support their arguments, I totally disagree with this statement with several reasons and examples as follows.
To start with, expecting to have privacy in internet age for to tkae benefits of information is a great way us to broaden perspectives on the real world.
This is attributed to the fact that it offers opportunities for people to become growing into adulthood and building astrong character.
Over the decades, today’s rat-race societyhas been evolving and changing at a surprising speed with such a hecticlifestyle.
Therefore, people are hard-pressed fortime and feel depressed or drained by the increasing amount of work.
However, in this respect, many of us would like to expand and widen their intellectual horizons by expecting to have privacy in internet age for to tkae benefits of information,which makes them think differently about multiple things.
This is because it allows us to look outside the box and approach things in a different way.
Second, expecting to have privacy in internet age for to keep rights of individual and national secret is a great way for us to learn important lifelessons on the real world.
This is attributed to the fact that it offers opportunities for people to become growing into adulthood and building a strong character.
Over the decades, today's rat-raced society has been evolving and changing at a surprising speed with such a hectic lifestyle.
Therefore, people are hard pressed for time and feel depressed or drained by the increasing amount of work.
As a result, we are still immature and have a long way to go when we are grown up.
During this long journey, we are prone to make mistakes and sometimes tend to misbehave.
However, in this respect, many of us get a lot of life lessons and enrich our spirit by expecting to have privacy in internet age for to keep rights of individual and national secret.
This is because it allows us to get to move on with the real value that we cannot learn from textbooks.
Therefore, we are able to experience something special and it will have a great impact on our lives.
Thus, this proves that expecting to have privacy in internet age is nessary for our society.
All things considered, it is my belief thatmy argument regarding this topic has been effectively and precisely deliveredwith the reasons mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ook outside the box and approach things in a different way. Second, expecting to have privacy in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99761336516 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84933216515 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45584725537 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.173245551 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.210526316 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.53405017921 419% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27226222785 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898019519111 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128518444175 0.0737576698707 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898019519111 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128518444175 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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