Essay topics: TPO-42 - Independent Writing TaskWorkers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Essay topics: TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task

Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are certain considerations of factors which everyone can take into account to investigate and examine employees' satisfaction with activities which they are doing at a workplace. I certainly believe that workers shouldn't do similar tasks all day long. Someone can conspicuously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The reasons on which my stance is based are discussed in details below.

Firstly, the most glaring and obvious negative consequences of fulfilling the same task all day long is that workers will inevitably become bored with it and a person who is fed up with the job will be unavoidably disappointed with his life as well. In fact, it is natural for us to be engaged in many types of activities and absence of stimulation which is associated with monotonous jobs has a soporific effect on human beings. In other words, doing the same task or similar assignments for a long period of time is merely unnatural for us.

Secondly, one of the main characteristics of the humankind is curiously or a necessity to get new skills and information. Unfortunately, doing similar task will surely take from us the possibility to learn something new at workplace. As a result, the employee who works, for instance, at an assembly line feels himself unsatisfied and even unworthy. By contrast, a worker who has an opportunity to try something novel will be able to meet his need in learning and thus his prospect on a life will be promising and positive.

Admittedly, there are some justifications by one who argues that doing similar activities has some advantages. Chiefly, it may satisfy the employee because one will refine his performance with practice; however, there is a high likelihood that the worker will lose one's concentration on the task doing and as a result one might begin to do mistakes and even cause damage to the business. Under such circumstances it is unreasonable to expect that the discussed employee will feel satisfaction. Besides, a person who does a wide variety of tasks may improve performance by using skills which were developed for implementation different tasks for doing a new assignment.

Due to aforementioned ground, all workers ought to be engaged in doing a variety of distinct activities because it is beneficial for their self-esteem and bring satisfaction with their job.

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Average: 8 (1 vote)
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Independent TOEFL Writing

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...place. I certainly believe that workers shouldnt do similar tasks all day long. Someone ...
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Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... task or similar assignments for a long period of time is merely unnatural for us. Secondly...
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Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ng and thus his prospect on a life will be promising and positive. Admittedly, there are...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...gh likelihood that the worker will lose ones concentration on the task doing and as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in fact, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1951.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05440414508 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07799169264 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528497409326 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3090672598 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.9375 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186071278869 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676969782043 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676449147027 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104908537303 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445109714749 0.0645574589148 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

ok. I will not use the intro template.
Yesterday I took a probe toefl test reading and lestening sections I was scored 98 percent and 96. Those parts of essay are really easy and I suddenly understood that there is no need to think and work hard and try to write a good, really good essay. I am required to demonstrate that I can write an essay within 30 minutes without mistakes. I read VHB works which are really simple. Thus I decided to take some ideas from him.
Now, I have a week before the test thus I must harry up. I am seeking your advice again. If I write my own intro, what is wrong with today's essay?
Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate your work.

Thank you for your good words about my essays.
there is a question you said since it used a lot of pattern sentences too, "too" implies that my essay is full of pattern sentences. May you point on them?
I use such sentences mostly in intro, than at the beginning of the conclusion and Admittedly, chiefly in the third paragraph but only those two words.
I am afraid than I may be unaware about other pattern sentences. So, may you point out on them?
Eugene.

I never read his essays on those themes. His ideas are quite simple. You suggested me to be simple. For instance, in speaking topics when you are asked about the place which you often visit four of five answer were about parents' home.
So, the supposed repetions of ideas is a coincidence.

I did not copy anyones essays it is merely meaningless. What will I do at the exam? This is a simple logic.

I do need to prepare to the exam and quickly. I read and printed essays nomber 44; 46; 48. I did copied the template from the intro, than the idea with the third paragraph, substituted my to wrap up on more elaborate Due to aforementioned ground and it is it.
I want to underscore that coping someone eslo works is illogical idea. I do not have troubles with logic.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 387 350
No. of Characters: 1903 1500
No. of Different Words: 205 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.435 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.917 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.007 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 125 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.713 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5