Everyone experiences being a leader at some point in their life. However, not everyone is good at leading others. What do you think are the qualities of a good leader?
The role of a leader is something which inspires everyone to follow his/her footsteps and encourages every person to dream more, learn more and achieve more. Leaders instill in people a hope for success and a belief in themselves. Leadership and learning are indispensable to each other. A person who has immense grasp of the topic, has the required experience and has the ability to motivate people can become a successful leader. I feel that the role of a leader is very pivotal and comes with a lot of responsibility. In my opinion, the ability to think rationally and practicing what you preach are two primary qualities that a leader must have.
Talking about the first quality i.e. to think rationally is in my view indispensable for any leader. The ability to take correct decisions and to take them quickly are the qualities of an excellent leader. When I think about taking the correct decisions at the correct time only one name comes to my mind is that of the Indian cricket captain MS Dhoni. His thinking abilities are so superior and in favor of the team that he gets successful most of the times while taking critical decisions on the field. His ability to lead from the front and taking the team along with him are truly inspiring and motivating. So, I feel that thinking practically and being able to take precise decisions at crunch positions are crucial in shaping of a good leader.
The second most important quality is practicing what you preach. I feel this quality is important because I have seen several leaders in various fields not doing what they tell other team members to do. For example, I remember when I was doing a group project in my semester recently. Our group leader was so laid back and complacent that he only ordered people do to things rather than showing us how to do. His attitude towards the team was so unpleasant that I never got the motivation or zeal for doing the work. Had he uplifted our team by cheering or motivating us we would have been able to do a much better job. So, that is why I feel that a leader should always push his teammates in achieving more and be a source of encouragement.
Therefore, in conclusion I feel that taking along the team by keeping their morale high and thinking about the team rationally are the two most important characteristics of a good leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65700483092 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64242375922 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497584541063 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9856029201 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295115947908 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856753740133 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546721436122 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16604992145 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022195936991 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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