Experience is the best teacher
I agree. We learn many things from variety of accidents. If we are good student, we will graduate from the world’s university by a good mark. Humans usually act based on their experience and rely to instinctive senses. Followings are some of the reasons that prove why experience is important:
First of all, imagine a new-born baby who cannot talk and our conversation does not any sense to it. How the baby learns to talk? Answer is by experience and interacting with other people to recognize the world. As an analogy, we learn how to live and deal with others by experience pleasant or unpleasant events as a new-born person in new situations (the world in the mentioned case). This clarify that experience is a real concept and can be perceived.
There is an instinctive force or if I want to say better, an instinctive armor which is a boot to our species from God, that protect us to endanger ourselves. The principle is that preventing probably danger, is necessity! Humankind thinks and decides about something according to potentially dangers which can threaten people. Database to decide and analyze situations by that manner, is prepared by experience as an evolutionary process. In this way, all of our memories help us to avoid unpleasant occasions a boost our life expectancy. Let’s to describe a paradigm: you have an exam and are trying to study the book entirely; There is a less important chapter that no question has been asked of it last four years; Instinctively, you will act in accordance with the unwritten rule in your mentality that it is better to study it in case one question would ask of the chapter; Thereby, you assurance yourself that I would be safe tomorrow; This is the interpretation of aforementioned rule.
At the third place, perceiving transparent concepts of living is just possible by taking lots of experience. For instance, you have no idea how much people can be complicated and act differently when you are youth; So you believe that all are kind and honest. By passing time, you have to contract with many type of personalities in university, work, folks or other forums; Eventually, a person would emerge that screw you and abuse your honest spirit by an unbelievable manner; That is the time, you understand what is exact meaning of betraying.
All in all, there are many interesting issues that are arguable in this domain. The main point is that, were not for our experiences, we would undergo many difficulties and failures. People got used to relying on elderly people’s experience more than past. The thing is the world will teach you rigorously unless you take the lesson in advance and there is no difference between the reach or the poor. Experience is the best teacher at the earth planet school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, third, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2304.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8813559322 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87772390728 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550847457627 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.0101212241 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4761904762 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148287649907 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05446225478 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112298328487 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870907055324 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730456750138 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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