TPO-24 - Independent Writing Task
It can be a good idea, but not in any age. It subjected to a teeage how much can be stant on difficult situation. I think the grade of the tolerancy has a direct relationship with the teenage's age. Let to explain the opinion:
There is an idiom that is used by many adult persons:" act your age"; It is a gesture that can be infered from it, humans believes the job or task must be proportion with the audiance age.
If parents is to have children with healthy behavior, they should give them tasks and clever education to discover their talent pluse preparing them with future and salitery life. As an example, imagine that parents want to teach their children to how make money and nudge him to be independent; In other hand, this era, is used information technology and computer to build a good world. So, if the parents are open-mind people, they will encorage him to attend programming cources and use his learnt skills to develope an application, website, software, game or other things. It can be effective for a person who has passed more than half of highschool educations (it mean he/she should be in an proper age). Moreover, if the teenage's age is less than require for this practice, it will lead to a wise result; becase the brain don't reach to matuality enough. If the age is more than proper range, it cann't attract the person or it can be out of person's efficiency.
As second example, consider parents who put thier teenage be a car plumber or a construction building. It is aweful!. because teenages need live delicately, kindly and with colorful dreams. The parents think probably that they are prepare him/she for being a successful and hotshot person in the future!, but something that eactly would be happen, is destroying the teenage's phsychological health.
As conclusion, there is a remarkable point that if you are to make useful human, you should consider his spirit and age at the first step and set his prospectives up by clever tasks and jobs. Good parents are not intelligence essentially; but intelligence parents are good parents difinetely
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...litery life. As an example, imagine that parents want to teach their children to ...
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Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'means'?
Suggestion: means
...e than half of highschool educations it mean he/she should be in an proper age. More...
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Line 3, column 694, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... educations it mean he/she should be in an proper age. Moreover, if the teenages a...
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Line 3, column 827, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lead to a wise result; becase the brain dont reach to matuality enough. If the age i...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...a construction building. It is aweful!. because teenages need live delicately, kindly a...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'prepared'.
Suggestion: prepared
...he parents think probably that they are prepare him/she for being a successful and hots...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7811634349 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73584660083 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554016620499 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3023190235 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0276697228189 0.236089414692 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00829151436936 0.076458572812 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173079875333 0.0737576698707 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0188213746344 0.150856017488 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174049566175 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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