The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. do you agree or disagree with the statement? use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Great things never come up from a comfort zone. So Personally, I strongly agree with the statement for two main reasons. People should have the perseverance to reach their big dreams, moreover, gaining experience is only by trying many times without giving up.
To begin with, people should have the perseverance to get their targets. People’s success is the result of trying and failing many times. No one can get his dream from the first try. Example, when the baby starts to walk, he falls many times. But by the human nature move him to try many times until he can learn how to walk. So never give up is the first lesson, we learn it. I can say that without this principle human had never gained any development. Such as trying to fly by brother’s rights, inventing electric light, and many inventions came after thousands of trying.
In addition, people can learn a very precious lesson, experience if they never give up. Experience is simply the name people give to their mistakes. And these mistakes are the only source of their knowledge. So that people should not give up if they want to enrich their knowledge. For instance, Thomas Edison didn’t give up until he discovered the most important invention, electric light which changes the world. If we ask Mr. Edison how long did it take or how many times did he fail. Surely, Edison would answer it took many years and he failed hundreds of times to reach his dream.
In conclusion, Never give up is the golden key to achieve goals and dreams. Moreover, it is the main source of increase knowledge. It people stop and give up easily they will gain regression and boring life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
...e main source of increase knowledge. It people stop and give up easily they will gain ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72664359862 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47674980163 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4495412303 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.0476190476 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7619047619 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169671500542 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567598544136 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531767534357 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127498581332 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336606252889 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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