friendships with a few people for a long time is more essential important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends quickly.
sad
In the new era, people have a connection with each other than in the past. Newspapers and magazines are accessible to everyone. Social media plays a key role in people's awareness of the poverty of people worldwide. For instance, particular websites connect people who want to help others. Due to these improvements, people are more cautious about the importance of helping others. I will state my perspective on this issue in the following.
The life of humans is not linear. people experience many challenges during their life. The most important point in life is persistence in adversities. But sometimes it is not enough. people need each other in difficulties. sometimes individuals can not solve problems on their own. it is hard to handle all their issues alone. I remember when I was in college, I had lost all my money. I did not have any cash to buy food. I shamed to request help from others. There was an organization in our college which helps people who have financial problems. this organization consists of students who they monthly allocate some money to it and do some charities in order to collect money. The organization lends some money to students who are in demand for cash. I could receive a loan from it, and now I am part of this organization, which I pay monthly to it to help others who may need help in the future.
Consequences of poverty will cause dangerous conditions in a society. it has harmful effects on other people. it is not true that we say, the living conditions of others do not matter to me. The problems of individuals of every member of society have an indirect influence on our life. For instance, by intensifying poverty in a country, the level of criminal actions will increase in this circumstance, it will destroy honesty in society. people will not trust each other. So in sum up, we must be aware of the obstacles of people who live near us.
The importance of helping others in ways that we can afford provides a positive impact on our mental health. people who propose conditions in order to prepare a better life for others are heroes. we must respect them and support them in their paths.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 34, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ing. The life of humans is not linear. people experience many challenges during their...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...sities. But sometimes it is not enough. people need each other in difficulties. someti...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
...people need each other in difficulties. sometimes individuals can not solve problems on t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ls can not solve problems on their own. it is hard to handle all their issues alon...
^^
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y. I did not have any cash to buy food. I shamed to request help from others. The...
^
Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...lps people who have financial problems. this organization consists of students who t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ause dangerous conditions in a society. it has harmful effects on other people. it...
^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...it has harmful effects on other people. it is not true that we say, the living con...
^^
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ce, it will destroy honesty in society. people will not trust each other. So in sum up...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...a positive impact on our mental health. people who propose conditions in order to prep...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...re a better life for others are heroes. we must respect them and support them in t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72944297082 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73294262059 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519893899204 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6560684019 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.4333333333 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5666666667 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.45110844103 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132277940021 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343887866512 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044847619775 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925733191103 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556399318312 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.