In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers
or television or of studying at traditional schools.
Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
Technology, modern marvel, is improving our way of living in every aspect. It's influencing our way of living in both positive and negative way. Certain consideration should be shown before complete reliance on technology is developed from which turn over or coming back would be impossible. Generally speaking, I do prefer studying at traditional school, in my view traditional school provides way more than studying through computer.
First, it's not only the education you get to learn on school, it's the discipline, appropriate manner and improving one character at school. School is second home to the student, where they learn discipline, manner which is shown throughout their life, lacks in studying online via computers. For instance, in my high school back home, teacher used to teach the way of speaking to senior, how to show affections to juniors, manner to be displayed on public gathering and a lot more and now a am thankful that I got a chance to learn those besides the text.
In addition to learning discipline, manner at school, traditional system of schooling teach someone to get along with the teacher, work as in group which is the basic nature of human. For example, at high school we are given a group assignment and we had to accomplish that project working on group which developed our workability to complete the task working on group later on also.
Finally, studying at home by using technology does not involve human interaction, which pushes student to dormant life style instead of active. Someone might say with online way of education we could get free time, we can work studying as well and so on. High school time is particularly the time period to learn more about life and learn way more that can be provided through online technology. We are social creature, involving and always working and studying in front of computer screen provides a boring life depleting our social life.
By the way of conclusion, based on the argument explored above, I'm of the opinion that traditional way of schooling helps in enhancing social, moral and attraction towards working rather the individualism which is basic principle of human living.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: IT_IS[7]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ving our way of living in every aspect. Its influencing our way of living in both p...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e education you get to learn on school, its the discipline, appropriate manner and ...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...public gathering and a lot more and now a am thankful that I got a chance to lear...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...public gathering and a lot more and now a am thankful that I got a chance to learn t...
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Line 4, column 378, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...lete the task working on group later on also. Finally, studying at home by using t...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
..., based on the argument explored above, Im of the opinion that traditional way of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, by the way, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02216066482 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72667934919 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534626038781 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3153881374 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7857142857 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174600981168 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690265468797 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711714411294 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974299827946 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377987508804 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.