A gift can contribute to child's development.What gift do you prefer?

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A gift can contribute to child's development.What gift do you prefer?

Gifts play a major role in a child's development.I prefer to gift children,books for plethora of reasons.However, I believe that
if children read only books monotonously without applying what they read results in a vital problem.

I belive books are best gifts. Firstly, books are extensive sources of information.A child can learn and develop variety of skills just by studying books.
For example, reading novels not only instils a sense of imagination in the mind of children, but also enhances the command they have over the language.
Books turn enthusiastic readers into authors. They encourage children to write stories using their creativity and imagination.
For instance, my friend was fond of novels right from his childhood and started writing short stories and poems at age of twelve. Today, he is one among the renowned playwright in my city.

Secondly, books cover wide variety of topics. Right from any small issue in politics to major rule changes in sports, books include even the finer details.
Pampa, a famous Kannada poet had quoted," Reading books is equivalent to travelling the entire world". To elaborate, he suggested that since books include all topics 'under the sky',
reading books alone is equivalent to travelling around the world.

Even though, reading books have lot of advantages, mere reading may not result in all round development of children. There are high chances that children may become introverts without any practical experiences.
This is detrimental to the society, as today's children are tomorrow's citizens. Hence, it is quite essential for children to apply whatever they read so that they can develop social and political skills.
It is required to strike perfect balance between reading books, appreciate what is being written and try to inculcate those aspects in daily life.

In a nutshell, I believe gifting books has many advantages, as they are exhaustive resources and include information related to all facets of life which inturn leads to overall development of a child.
Contrary to this if children read only books without taking into account of outside world, it is highly likely that they can become introverts and therefore, avoid social interactions

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26433915212 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.179551122195 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0773067331671 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473815461347 0.046263068375 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0473815461347 0.0685040099705 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127182044888 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0448877805486 0.0351676179071 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81321470219 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324189526185 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0598503740648 0.0887237588012 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0124688279302 0.0209618222197 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124688279302 0.0139019557991 90% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2236.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 354.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.31638418079 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409604519774 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319209039548 0.251872472559 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19209039548 0.174417080927 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132768361582 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81321470219 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.524397521467 114% => OK
Word variations: 70.0829473192 59.2087087015 118% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6315789474 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3964748978 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.684210526 120.699889404 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.5376344086 309% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 50.5524829022 45.7405998639 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.59090909091 1.45489161554 109% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131756649215 0.300154397459 44% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0875002092862 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0662810751831 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.758133651876 0.497263757937 152% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207740809222 0.151897553556 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426437564059 0.114077575197 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428538973421 0.0781384742642 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.129520484597 0.336927656856 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.091737595303 0.067059652881 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571893354493 0.210909579961 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477138739112 0.0618886996521 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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